It's a bit better, but I still can't visualize your vault very well, because there's 1,001 different things that you might be doing right or wrong, and words like "perfect", "decent" and "semi good" aren't descriptive enough for me to visualize what you mean. And actually, what you THINK you're doing right or wrong in your run, plant, or takeoff aren't necessarily what you ARE doing right or wrong. That's why you're asking for advice, right?
Enloe11 wrote: ... as soon as I leave ... the ground my trail leg starts coming through because my hips come under.
I don't draw the same conclusions you're drawing (that the trail leg starts coming through because my hips come under) - your description isn't complete enough for me to know. Even if it's true, then WHY are the hips coming under? Something quite different than that may be happening, without you or the people watching in live action at the meet seeing it. You say your steps aren't under, but it sounds like they are. You say you're getting into a C, but it sounds like you're not.
With vid, we can sometimes slow it down to slow-motion (expecially if it's a QuickTime vid. If I SAW it, I'd understand instantly. If a pic is worth a thousand words, then a vid must be worth at least 10,000!
To post a vid, you open up an account on YouTube (or some other vid website), and upload it there. Then in PVP, you link to your vid. That should be fairly easy for you to do. If you're not sure, just ask a friend or someone in your family for help.
Enloe11 wrote: I can keep myself in the "inverted C" position long enough to get on a big pole.
Maybe so, but I'll repeat what I said earlier: Getting on a bigger pole isn't the object of the game. Improving your PR in a meet (usually by improving your technque) is the goal.
Also, how high are you gripping on the pole? Are you getting a "decent" handstand? Not sure what you consider "decent", but I'll let you tell me. What grip and what pole did you use to clear 14-6 in the meet, and what grip and what pole did you use to clear 15-0 in practice?
Kirk